Great Video! Also I couldn't relate more... buying and retrieving student tickets couldn't be more of an inconvenience. I do believe bringing things to an electronic platform would change the game and make everyone's live much easier. The only thing I could recommend is making sure the speaker on your laptop is picking up your voice. Sound was tending to fade in and out.
Hey Tyler! Good job on your pitch! This is definitely I and many other students can relate too! Especially in our growing digital world that we live in this surprises me that it does not already exist! For any product or service it's all about making peoples lives easier and saving them time. I believe that this definitely does both!
Hi Tyler! I like the hook that you start the pitch with. It puts the audience or potential investor in the situation of the people who are affected by this issue. You have a very compelling reason for why this is a need, and your piece evidence regarding the fact that other companies that sell tickets use electronics to exchange the tickets rather than using physical tickets.
Hi Tyler
ReplyDeleteGreat Video! Also I couldn't relate more... buying and retrieving student tickets couldn't be more of an inconvenience. I do believe bringing things to an electronic platform would change the game and make everyone's live much easier. The only thing I could recommend is making sure the speaker on your laptop is picking up your voice. Sound was tending to fade in and out.
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Hey Tyler!
ReplyDeleteGood job on your pitch! This is definitely I and many other students can relate too!
Especially in our growing digital world that we live in this surprises me that it does not already exist! For any product or service it's all about making peoples lives easier and saving them time. I believe that this definitely does both!
Hi Tyler! I like the hook that you start the pitch with. It puts the audience or potential investor in the situation of the people who are affected by this issue. You have a very compelling reason for why this is a need, and your piece evidence regarding the fact that other companies that sell tickets use electronics to exchange the tickets rather than using physical tickets.
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