Monday, October 22, 2018

17A Elevator Pitch No. 2

Reflection: It seemed like everyone that commented agreed that this idea would benefit all of them and they could all relate to the problem. I think that everyone being able to relate to this problem is the most useful feedback I received. I did not really receive any feedback that I did not expect or that was wrong.

What I Changed: The only thing that was requested for me to change was make sure my mic picked up everything I had to say, so that is the only thing I really changed.
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  1. UnknownOctober 28, 2018 at 1:20 PM

    Hi Tyler, I liked your elevator pitch very much. I think it is a big improvement from the last one. Your voice is much louder and clearer and it is easier to understand what you were trying to say. Everyone is able to relate to the problem that you are trying to fix, so I think that it makes it easier for people to relate to and understand the elevator pitch.

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