Feedback: I got very good feedback on my last pitch so there was not much to change. I just made sure that my mic picked my voice up and that was about it.
What I Changed: I did not really have to change much. I feel very comfortable in front of my camera now and have the pitch basically memorized so it was much easier this time around.
Hi Tyler,
ReplyDeleteI loved your pitch and your idea. I thought your pitch was very professional. You dressed pretty nice, and you sounded great. The mic picked you up super well and you really sounded confident and comfortable. Great job!
Hey,
ReplyDeleteNice job on your elevator pitch! I noticed that you look more comfortable in front of the camera like you said, which is a really good thing. Also, since you said that you have basically memorized it, I think that was helpful as well. You look and sound professional when you speak, and you explained your idea clearly.
Good idea, and your pitch was well executed. All was good with the microphone and you seemed engaged in what you are selling. I believe this pitch could work in a real life situation.
ReplyDeleteHi Tyler,
ReplyDeleteYour idea was clearly expressed through your pitch. The best part for me was how you opened it with addressing everyone and the emotion behind the frustration. I felt the urgency and weight of the problem. Another note is how you took the time to dress professionally, it emphasizes your character!